One Year Extension (persuasion paragraph)

College education will extend for one year. Many student are not in favor of this kind of decision of our government. Tuition fee will increase if they are adding one more year in college. Many families that supporting their sons and daughters in school will have financial problems. Because of this, their parents will wrk hard for them, Also, many working students will work hard to finished their course because of this adding one more year in all college courses. Our government wants to compare the education here in our to other countries. Politicians say that if the education in college will become five years, our country will become rich because they are the future leaders. Many students will not going to pursue their studies because of finacial problem.